“Ask Jane” Shorts
One-to-three minute videos on critical writing questions that give you the answers you need quickly and let you get back to writing!
How can I describe an emotion or abstract concept in ways that resonate with readers?
In this video, I'm exploring a fascinating challenge for writers—how to make abstract concepts and emotions resonate with readers. Inspired by writing wisdom...
How far into my thriller should I place the inciting incident?
In today's video, we're tackling a question many writers face: how soon should the inciting incident occur? In this example, we're focusing on thrillers, but...
Are certain transitional words and phrases more suited to literary or genre fiction?
In this video, we explore how the same transitional words can serve both literary and genre fiction. Like so many elements of effective writing, it's all...
How do I know when to start a new paragraph?
In this video, I'm tackling a question we've all faced: when should we start a new paragraph? In dialogue, the rule is clear—each new speaker gets a new...
What is the ideal length for the chapters in my book?
Ever puzzled over the perfect chapter length for your manuscript? In my latest video, I break down this common writing question, emphasizing that while...
How do I transition points of view without confusing readers?
In my latest video, I tackle a common challenge for fellow authors: how to skillfully manage transitions from points of view to shifts in time and place--even...
How can I use cliffhangers between chapters without them feeling contrived?
Join me as I share the secret sauce of crafting chapter endings that will keep your readers on the edge of their seats! In this video, I tackle the challenge...
Three Questions to Ask to Start Fixing Your Saggy Middle
In this video, I’ll share three thought-provoking questions that, when combined with the 8 tips I've previously shared on fixing saggy middles, will put you...
Tips to Fix Saggy Middles #8
We've reached my final tip to fix a sagging middle—cut the boring bits! In this video, I discuss the essentials of crafting engaging content, from avoiding...
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