“Ask Jane” Shorts
One-to-three minute videos on critical writing questions that give you the answers you need quickly and let you get back to writing!
Do You Write Scenes in Order or Out of Order?
Every writer knows the feeling. You're stuck on the scene in front of you, and meanwhile a later scene is running so clearly in your head you could write it...
How Much Description Does a Recurring Setting Need?
How do you describe a setting your readers will return to over and over—the church, the cottage, the antiques shop—without giving away every detail on their...
Reveal Character Through Description (First-Person POV Tip)
Reveal character through description and you turn ordinary scene-setting into one of the most efficient tools in fiction. There's a technique I've used in the...
How Much Description Is Too Much in Historical Fiction?
How much description belongs in historical fiction—the environment, the clothing, the food, the textures of another era? There's no fixed rule, and I think...
Memoir Writing: How to Handle Relationships You Can’t Verify
Memoir writing raises a question most writing guides don't answer: what do you put on the page when your memories conflict with someone else's? I wrote...
How to Describe Your Protagonist in First-Person POV
Describing your protagonist's appearance in first-person POV is trickier than it looks—your narrator can't just announce her own features. There's a technique...
Writing Food in Fiction: Does Genre Change How Much to Include?
Writing food in fiction depends on your genre—and getting it right can make the difference between an immersive reader experience and a scene that bogs down...
Using Brand Names in Fiction: What Every Writer Should Know
Can you use brand names in your fiction writing? It's an important question, and the answer is more nuanced than you might think. In this quick Ask Jane...
How Much Technical Detail Should Your Fiction Protagonist Have?
How much technical detail should your protagonist's skills get in your story? In this quick writing lesson, I break down how genre and reader expectations...
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