In this video, I break down a simple three-step revision plan that will help you move from stuck to strategic, focusing on the specific language patterns that make the biggest difference in your writing. You’ll discover practical techniques for strengthening your prose that you can start using right away.
The question is, I can’t even think about revising. I’m completely overwhelmed. I don’t know where to start. I don’t know what to do. Help.
Revising can be an overwhelming process, but it doesn’t have to be if you have a plan.
So if you’re feeling overwhelmed, what that tells me is you don’t have a procedure, a plan.
A good place to start is the three steps that I delineate in my book, Beat the Bots.
Take a look at what I call UGVs. These are unsighted generalizations and vague terminology.
Broadly, they come in two categories, quantities, numbers, and then adjectives, adverbs, descriptors, modifiers. Get in your mind that the goal is specificity. The more precise your language, the stronger the writing.
The second element that should be in your revision plan is looking at your verbs.
To eliminate as many to be verbs as possible, go with active verbs. And then the third broad category is to integrate more sensory references. This is how we show don’t tell. Don’t tell me it’s raining. Create an immersive experience in which I, the reader, feel the rain alongside the character.
I know you can do these things. And I hope that you will comment on how it goes for you as you try and experiment with these techniques. First step, develop that plant. If this tip had value for you, would you like it? Would you share it? Would you subscribe to the channel? It opens up features that lets us make these videos even more valuable for you.
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